Evito [rough cut]

Generally I, along with my group, am very pleased with the way this first rough edit has turned out. We realize of course that it is not perfect and that there is more editing in store for it and certain features are in need of refining or changing. To name just one of hand, the title of the film is, at present, only slightly easier to see than the hidden Karamel Kanu's in various shots. Therefore the title will need to be changed, we plan to do this be subtly shadowing it in order to make the pale words stand out more. Yet criticism aside, I feel that the editing process has been extremely successful and that we have made significant progress towards a final cut.